thanks a lot for your suggestions! I did some little corrections on the last 2 pages, including a new font which I really like much more than the old one.
Thanks to Stefan Dinter for his advice!
Then there are the pencils for the third page.
I do them with my beloved light blue Colerase pencils. Since I have an electric sharpener I use up one pencil a page...
At the moment I'm preparing a short portfolio of this project for Emerald City Con at Seattle. Any suggestions on the portfolio or on DO's and DONT's? (e.g. don't talk to Bob Schreck about his current career or don't talk about Dave Sim with anybody)
Have a great sunny day everybody!!